Halo Heads

Ya' don't need cheese fer' this, fellas....

No, not mice... even worse than normal rodents...

*Takes a deep breath*

EVIL COVE*NUT* SQUIRRELS!!!!!!! >-(

AAAAAAAHHHHHHHHHH!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

:-D

#5 - Mira 118 - 03/24/2007 - 05:34

Suggestions

Try and have some more visual action going on. Reading big chunks of dialog like that will make the reader bored. Maybe have the cats...err..spartans(?) rooting around or something. A bunch of copy and pasts of sparta-cats gets pretty boring pretty quick.

#4 - Jadomaster - 03/09/2007 - 03:03

OMG

GET THE THE MICE TRAPS. FORGET THE CHEESE

#3 - Fritz 160 - 03/08/2007 - 21:46

hmmm

will these spartan rodents be dual wieldable? :-)

#2 - iamcrazy4444 - 03/08/2007 - 18:27

Lab rats

I always knew that our decades of performing testing on lab-rats might one day come back to haunt us.

#1 - Mike - 03/08/2007 - 16:52

...Rodents?

Get the cheese!! XD

#0 - Hells_Sinner - 03/08/2007 - 16:04

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